A Kingswood Family Christmas - Chapter 2
Added 2024-10-18 16:00:01 +0000 UTCFriday 23 December 2022
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A story within a story can be distracting or convoluted, but I think it works really well in this setting. I'm glad you like it. Danny and Finn are always a joy to write, as it's a pairing unlike any of Danny's other friendships/relationships.
Matthew Smith
2024-10-20 12:24:02 +0000 UTC@Brandon Including the family members was really fun. As always, space/word count doesn't always allow for full exploration of every character, but they're all there and joining in. They were some interesting dynamics to explore. If Mikey's story got you crying, I can't weait to see your reaction to the next one! As for Josh and Mark... no spoilers, but something big is coming... @Johnny Technically it's already been two years since they met, so they're not far off that already! :)
Matthew Smith
2024-10-20 12:22:15 +0000 UTC@Rutabaga You're correct, sometimes there is more than just one. I like the comparison to the cartoon though. There's definitely an aspect of that sort of conflict sometimes.
Matthew Smith
2024-10-20 12:19:42 +0000 UTC@John Realy glad you like them. It was fun being able to explore some imagined/theoretical scenarios. Nicky's is probably the one I'm most proud of and I can't wait to see reactions to it. As for Mark... don't worry, something big is coming... @Johnny Danny's story (Dante Devias) was a separate birthday gift Chris wrote for him. Chris has written him a part for the Christmas story too. He wouldn't leave him out. He did only write 7 parts though!
Matthew Smith
2024-10-20 12:18:18 +0000 UTCDanny's has been written and given to him in previous chapters... so there will be... 7? Including Chris himself? Or would it be James (I doubt it)?
Johnny Kape
2024-10-20 10:40:44 +0000 UTCJosh gets hard and wanks. Cute 🥰 also Mark is hard because of Josh
Mr Luigi
2024-10-20 08:24:28 +0000 UTCI really like the daily stories that Chris has written. I'm sure Danny's will be the last, but what on earth will it be. I think they all will be good, but really looking forward to Nicky's and Danny's. And damn it, it is time for Mark to make a move.
John Warren
2024-10-20 02:04:42 +0000 UTCIt's kind of like the old Bugs Bunny cartoon where there's a good angel on one shoulder and a devil on the other shoulder.
Rutabaga
2024-10-19 20:39:42 +0000 UTCI hope Josh and Mark won't be like Chris and Danny - taking them three years to finally confess their feelings to each other!
Johnny Kape
2024-10-19 04:02:04 +0000 UTCBut Mikey seems to be able to resist those inner voice. That's a good sign, I guess?
Johnny Kape
2024-10-19 03:24:53 +0000 UTC<< Needed more sex! Sex sells!>> << I liked it!>> << It was shit! Seriously! Tell him it was shit! He’s shit! Everything’s shit!>> Why does it seem like Mikey has more than one voice talking to him at once?
Rutabaga
2024-10-19 00:40:35 +0000 UTCYay Finn!! This is so cool to see how all the boys interact with the family members! Ugh of course you have me crying on my lunch break at work over Chris's story about Mikey... I really need Josh to confess his love to Mark please.
Brandon Hardesty
2024-10-18 20:48:23 +0000 UTCI really like Chris's "once upon a time" storytelling style. But now all that I can think about is Danny's upcoming conversation with Finn.
Rutabaga
2024-10-18 20:36:02 +0000 UTC