A Kingswood Family Christmas - Chapter 3
Added 2024-10-25 16:00:01 +0000 UTCSaturday 24 December 2022
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Nicky's story was great. I loved that. And of course I loved when Danny was looked out naked and found by his family. It's great that the Davies' took Danny's wardrobe "malfunction" with humor.
Naked Justice
2024-10-29 20:46:26 +0000 UTCThat's why I made the comment that Danny was having his mid-life crisis 20 years early.
Rutabaga
2024-10-28 02:47:39 +0000 UTCThat, and David's so in-character question: “Wouldn’t that make you triplets?”
Deneb
2024-10-27 05:55:13 +0000 UTCThe highlight of this chapter, for me: “I’m sorry you lost your twin,” Aidan said, glancing at Cian thoughtfully for a moment. As he looked back up at Nicky he smiled and said, “You can have mine if you like. I’m not using him!” The good voice/naughty voice dichotomy is more evident with Mikey in this chapter.
Rutabaga
2024-10-26 14:09:41 +0000 UTCA wonderful and funny chapter! But: All the boys make fun of Danny and he is suffering... that is the bullying Angel talked about in book 3 I assume
Mr Luigi
2024-10-26 10:14:51 +0000 UTCYou were right Matt...for the second week in a row I'm sobbing because of Chris's story!
Brandon Hardesty
2024-10-25 20:18:48 +0000 UTCI think Danny is developing sort of an anxiety of not living up to the standards he thinks people, including (especially!) himself (and also us readers – don't you think so?) are demanding of him. This said, I think Chris's Story for Nicky was a balancing act (as Chris himself was very well aware of) and could have gone terribly wrong but for Nicky's growing acceptance of his own feelings (and Aidan and Cian adopting him as their "third twin" – a very moving act). So it became a bitter-sweet and extremely touching tale affecting the audience as much as the readers! Not so much of David in this chapter… I am still waiting for his realisation of what is going on with Mikey. How hard for his parents to have to deal with his undiagnosed psychosis! But Rob and Milo seem to be on brotherly terms again, so at least this issue is solved (for the time being)…
Deneb
2024-10-25 19:10:33 +0000 UTCHmm… looks like Danny's issue is getting worse and worse, and Matt the Author still doesn't want to solve it yet! 😔
Johnny Kape
2024-10-25 17:03:39 +0000 UTC
