The Kingswood Complication - Chapter 44
Added 2025-05-09 16:00:02 +0000 UTCComments
As an NB David, this chapter made me so happy! And Rutabaga you can fuck right off thanks
David
2025-09-04 04:24:30 +0000 UTCYeah, breathplay is something I steer clear of in real life, and there's actually rules against it at Kingswood too, so Rob is definitely being extra risky by creating it. That said (and sorry for the slight spoiler) it's not something I plan to re-use, just because it's so brutal and unnecessary.
Matthew Smith
2025-05-16 22:04:50 +0000 UTCI was wondering why we saw so little of Chris until coming (as it were) to the end of the chapter. He made up for it there. Poor David. I’m not a fan of they/them when referring to an individual - it defeats the whole purpose of language. If David is suffering from gender dysphoria, as clearly seems to be the case, I’m not convinced that enabling it in this fashion is the best course. Sorry if this view offends anyone. (By the way, it occurs to me that if anyone might be suitable for "they" or "them" it would be Mikey with all of his voices.) Hope Danny finds a suitable way to sort out the situation with Avery’s brother.
Rutabaga
2025-05-10 20:45:48 +0000 UTCYes the first couple in dorm 101: Jorge and Declan 😍 cute
Mr Luigi
2025-05-10 18:56:30 +0000 UTCBTW, WOD made me think of "Erotic asphyxiation". I used to read news saying some people (from my country) trying this and really... died from suffocation. I wonder if Matt got idea from it... Well, anyway, I have to say that I don't love it (and don't love to see Chris "playing" with that...)
Johnny Kape
2025-05-10 08:14:23 +0000 UTCNot sure if we can share links here. I'm not from the UK myself, but if the link works, this might help. https://x.com/AdamCSchembri/status/880051172954058753?t=EqeZr8JgDjkbLxHWL0d3Hw&s=19
Rich
2025-05-10 03:15:47 +0000 UTCAgreed all. Plus, Danny's advice to Mark hits the nail on the head. I hope that means Mark and Josh's relationship would boost from now on. Also, again, like in my other comment, now that Josh will have a real (and legal) dad, I hope his relationship with his bio-mother would be recovered under the help of Mr. Rudd. His mother is not that unforgivable IMO. (Not that I want Mr. Rudd to marry his mother! You know what I mean, right?)
Johnny Kape
2025-05-10 03:05:08 +0000 UTC> Jorge pulled out his phone, tapped away for a few seconds and turned it to show Nicky a picture of a bread roll. “What do you call this?” he demanded, “And why do the others tell me I shouldn’t ask?” Uh, so, being a non-native (not non-binary) like Jorge, I had no idea what this is talking about...
Johnny Kape
2025-05-10 02:59:22 +0000 UTCOkay, so I am about to fictionalize myself and write a story where I beat Todd to a pulp. If Mikey's voices are involved and they are the voice of reason, we know Todd is trash. Nice to see some mentor/mentee interactions in this chapter as well. I'm with Danny in not wanting Joseph to leave, although I know it has to happen. Nicky and Jorge's chat was so cute. Jorge seems like such a sweet kid. Mark gets the nod as hero this chapter, just dislodging Mikey from the top spot he's had recently. Josh and Mr. Rudd - I hope the adoption process will be smooth sailing. Not much at Kingswood seems to be. Happy things are ending with Danny and Mr. Rudd. Although it has been beneficial to both of them in a mental health sense, it still wasn't in my list of approved relationships. That's all for now - looking forward to seeing everyone else's comments soon.
Rich
2025-05-09 19:24:13 +0000 UTC
