The Kingswood Amelioration - Chapter 01
Added 2025-07-18 16:00:08 +0000 UTCComments
Always happy to see Mikey getting some love from the readers :)
Matthew Smith
2025-07-20 23:57:20 +0000 UTCThis seems like an appropriate quotable quote: >> “Wait,” Josh said, frowning heavily, “Did… did anything bad happen last year? I don’t recall?” <<
Rutabaga
2025-07-19 20:54:59 +0000 UTCRob, you're playing with fire... I agree with Rich, the whole situation is eventually going to blow up. I'm just not sure how Luke and Jazz will take when they know they both "sleep with Rob" separately. The sweetest moment of this chapter... I vote for Dom and Danny.
Johnny Kape
2025-07-19 07:43:47 +0000 UTCI love reading about Mikey, he's a very lovely boy. I hope he starts dating someone in this book
Mr Luigi
2025-07-19 06:17:29 +0000 UTCA wonderful first chapter! Josh and Mark are so lovely and cute 🥰 last time they wanked together without looking at each other and now they looked at each other, that's hot
Mr Luigi
2025-07-19 06:16:23 +0000 UTCYeah, Mikey continues to be a wonderful character to write, I'm glad he's equally enjoyable to read.
Matthew Smith
2025-07-18 21:48:40 +0000 UTCThanks, I'll correct that.
Matthew Smith
2025-07-18 21:41:50 +0000 UTCVisuals are already scheduled to be posted in a couple of days. Ddn't post it at the same time as the chapter just to avoid any potential spoilers for anyone who wanted to read chapter 1 first.
Matthew Smith
2025-07-18 21:41:25 +0000 UTCAwesome start! Maybe one day we could get a visual representation of the layout of the new dorm? I kinda miss the extra mini visual content to help imagine how the boys are arranged
Robert
2025-07-18 21:27:03 +0000 UTCI can’t believe no one else caught this new bit of information…Mark is dating…drumroll… Himself! He must really have the hots for himself. At least that is what his profile indicates on page 40. ‘it’s rare to catch Matt being sneaky…but this was a new twist 🤣😇
BayAreaSooner
2025-07-18 20:41:41 +0000 UTCNice catch - I totally forgot to look at David's mentee. This was a nice chapter to have - there are so many things about the boys to remember by now.
Rich
2025-07-18 19:49:48 +0000 UTCComment about the character profiles and history post (which doesn't allow comments): I noticed you sneaked a couple new pieces of information there that aren't recaps of what we know: The heights, weights and dick sizes have been updated to the new year, plus you included the name of David's new mentee.
Davide
2025-07-18 19:25:15 +0000 UTCOh, and my hero this chapter is Mikey. Huh, that's happened an awful lot in the past few months. But how could I not - him opening up about what happened, checking on how Rob was doing - he was a shoo-in. Also, Rutabaga, looking forward to seeing what you choose as your Quotable Quote.
Rich
2025-07-18 19:24:54 +0000 UTCI didn't catch that with Dom, but I'd like to see him again. Danny with Gray's dad would be asking for some kind of mess, but that would be very Kingswood.
Davide
2025-07-18 19:21:13 +0000 UTCDavid is due for a greater role in the sexual side of things. You're right, switching dorms might be a sign he'll get more involved.
Rich
2025-07-18 19:17:06 +0000 UTC*** PLEASE DON'T READ UNTIL YOU HAVE FINISHED THIS CHAPTER*** I know I've mentioned it at least once in the past, but I would not be unhappy if Rob and Mikey got together. Because unless Luke and Jazz turn out to be okay with being in a relationship with each other while each has a separate relationship with Rob (which sounds very Kingswood), that whole situation is eventually going to blow up. Also, I'm thinking based on the description, Danny will be aiming for the teacher who gives Mr. Rudd vibes. Gray's dad would seem to be off-limits because - hello, Gray's dad - but then Danny hasn't had much of a hang-up ultimately with being with Chris's relatives. The others just don't seem Danny's type. The chat between Dom and Danny, and the accompanying body language, makes me wonder if Dom will be making an appearance later on in this book. I can't wait to see Avery and the rest of the lads. So much to look forward to potentially happening in this book!
Rich
2025-07-18 19:06:01 +0000 UTCIt's good to finally catch a main chapter in real time. And it's relaxing to see everyone be on good terms. Chris saying he didn't have a thing last year makes me think the big thing this year may be about him. With David switching to the more sexually active dorm, I hope to see him get more involved. Last year, it seemed him not doing it was more because the others didn't think he was interested. The control getting used makes me happy. And this dare has dangerous potential, which should be fun.
Davide
2025-07-18 18:53:46 +0000 UTC
