The Kingswood Amelioration - Chapter 06
Added 2025-08-22 16:00:02 +0000 UTCComments
To clarify my comments about David, I don't want them to leave the story, but I'm scared he might. And I think this is making my brain focus on the worst case scenario, without considering other avenues where they get help while staying in Kingswood.
Davide
2025-08-24 08:46:27 +0000 UTCI think it shows how much Mark and Josh love each other that Mark was able to pull Josh out of his sorrow so easily. And Josh's presents were so thoughtful. It is truly a joy seeing the two of them together after all they've been though.
Rich
2025-08-23 19:11:56 +0000 UTCI always forget about the new Nifty. I still use the old one. Thanks for reminding us about rating it there. David does seem to be withdrawing themself more from the main group. Interesting idea about them leaving and Gray being a replacement. I agree that what Declan did was so cute; I know it means a lot to Jorge that he is trying to learn Spanish. I feel for Jorge. He's found a place where he is happy and someone he loves; now, it all may be taken away. I hope perhaps that there were parts of the conversation he missed hearing, and that he will be staying even if his family moves. The whole Avery and his parents situation is hard to read for me. Perhaps they feel they are trying to shield Avery somehow to protect him. Something dramatic will happen (see how good I am at predicting the obvious).
Rich
2025-08-23 19:08:22 +0000 UTCI felt awful when Josh's carefully planned presents for Mark got ruined. Seems like things turned out OK anyway. I had a quotable quote to post but it's too much of a pain to extract it from the protected PDF.
Rutabaga
2025-08-23 14:17:16 +0000 UTCwhat is also very exciting for me is the couple thing Mark and Gray are talking about. So going together and having sex like Gray did it with Nicky and the other couple Danny and Chris. It would be fun to see Josh and Mark together with Gray and Nicky and perhaps with other couples too π
Mr Luigi
2025-08-23 12:17:33 +0000 UTCa wonderful and cute chapter! I just thought about Mark and Gray, doing sex stuff together, that he is more with Gray than with Josh. But at the end of this chapter: Josh is topping Mark! Wow that's wonderful and cute. And perhaps later in this story Mark will fuck Josh... let's see π₯°
Mr Luigi
2025-08-23 12:14:15 +0000 UTCChapter 1 is now live on Nifty, in case you want to help Matt by rating the story there. The situations we saw and didn't see David in this chapter make me realise they barely interacts with the main group. Plus David's best friend, James, will leave at the end of the year, and Gray now feels a lot more like part of the group than David. I'm starting to get the impression Matt may be setting up Gray to be David's replacement. David seems intent on going through with recording the saloon, and they have tried and failed to get themselves to delete recordings they know hurt their friends. I previously wondered if David could get found out and expelled, but I have a different thought now. With David knowing this is wrong, maybe they'll voluntarily transfer to a more normal school to remove themselves from the temptation. But I can't see Matt introducing a new character to the main cast's dorms next year, so maybe Gray will ask if he can move to Nicky's dorm. Mark and Josh having sex was a big step for both of them in fighting their respective past traumas, I'm so proud of them. I also like that the smaller guy, in both body and dick size, was the top, I'm always a fan of defying society expectations. Plus they're adorable together, as seen in the exchanges regarding the date night. Speaking of adorable, Declan telling Jorge he loves him Spanish was so sweet. I hope Jorge won't have to leave, let's see how that develops. At the start of this year, I thought Avery's parents would have learned about why Daniel died from some kind of suicide note and I thought they were trying to protect Avery. As of Levi's previous appearance, the first part was wrong, and now the second one is starting to feel wrong too. They seem to care more about not having to face Avery knowing than on whether it would be good for him. Now this story will probably be on pause for a while, but surely Avery will learn what happened this year. The conversation about people in the dorm arguing if they like each other and if they don't had me dying of laughter, especially when I got to this part: βSo does that mean Chris likes you or hates you?β He cocked his head curiously at Gray. Gray thought for a moment and said, βYes!β Mikey now knows about Rob and Jazz and Rob and Luke, and Gray and Mark know only about Rob and Jazz. Now I kind of expect someone else to learn only about Rob and Luke, eventually leading to a conversation where different people are talking about a different partner without knowing. Speaking on Rob, I agree with Rich that him and Rob are starting to feel like they could become a couple. We're 6 days away from Chris' birthday, I always like Danny's midnight thing with him. But this year is different, Chris isn't allowed to cum. And I fully expect Danny to still fuck him, seeing that without Chris being able to cum should be fun.
Davide
2025-08-23 10:33:06 +0000 UTCRob and Mikey have been spending more time together as well, often doing sexual stuff. I could see them becoming a couple.
Davide
2025-08-22 21:17:13 +0000 UTCI know I'm not the one for quotable quotes, but Mark really moved me this week when he told Josh, βThe best part of any week is the part that has you in it!β Anyone else find it interesting that the one Rob came to watch at football practice was Mikey. I'm still hoping for the two of them to come together. I think I'd like it better than Rob being with either Jazz or Luke. Also, I enjoyed the chat between Mikey and Josh. Mikey's advice to Josh was so good. Hero of the week - a three-way tie: Mikey, Josh, and Mark. This is much shorter than my normal comments, but I'm looking forward to everyone else's so I can respond to them. I like the discussions we have about what we read. Seeing things that I totally missed or looking at the events and characters through someone else's eyes adds so much to the experience for me.
Rich
2025-08-22 21:11:44 +0000 UTCYes, both of them have come a long way. That was such a beautiful scene to end the chapter on.
Rich
2025-08-22 21:06:33 +0000 UTCI'll post my usual long comment tomorrow, but I want to say one thing now. I'm proud of Josh and Mark for overcuming their mental blocks about fucking caused by their past traumas.
Davide
2025-08-22 17:10:04 +0000 UTC
