The Kingswood Amelioration - Chapter 03
Added 2025-08-01 16:00:19 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks, not sure where the Smith came from there, I've used Morse everywhere else. As for Austin/Todd, there does seem to be a pattern forming here... Gray's dad definitely has an important role to play in the year ahead *maniacal laugh*
Matthew Smith
2025-08-08 11:23:42 +0000 UTCI agree about Chris, the play will probably be related to stuff happening around him. It's both more interesting from a narrative point of view and easier for Chris, as an amateur writer, to have something he can base his writing on. I encountered the term "demisexual" a while ago when one of my online friends discovered there's a word for how he feels. But I think it's cool that Matt is exploring lesser known kinds of sexual feelings.
Davide
2025-08-02 15:54:49 +0000 UTCI agree with something Mark said at the end of the last book - Josh is intimidating. To go through all that he has and not only survived, but done it without losing his spirit and his kindness is amazing. The two of them are a very cute couple.
Rich
2025-08-02 15:47:51 +0000 UTCBoth Mark and Gray will need to work on their communication skills with their partners. Both couples are cute; I hope they can get through this while it is still just a small issue.
Rich
2025-08-02 15:45:27 +0000 UTCI also found the interaction between David/Shane intriguing. You know Matt - he will drop hints forever, then spring it on us when our theories have run out. I also still worry about David. I'm just thinking that seeing the guys' bodies might not provide them with the thrill they need. The watching unseen seems to be what satisfies them.
Rich
2025-08-02 15:42:42 +0000 UTCI didn't pick up on a particular Quotable Quote this time but there were plenty of possibilities. I'm really curious to discover what Chris has been fashioning for this show. I wonder how much of it will be, in effect, allegorical as to the personal challenges being worked on by the principal lads we're familiar with? That would be consistent with his earlier work. I had not encountered the word "demisexual" before. I hope both Gray and Mark can summon the courage to open up communication with their partners about where they want to take things next. Knowing Mikey, David may find himself overwhelmed with other "volunteers" for the waxing salon. In my circle that's called being "volun-told."
Rutabaga
2025-08-02 13:45:58 +0000 UTCI think you called Zack Smith Zack Morse in the other chapter. Now I'm curious about this Year 12 Austin - Mikey's mind went immediately to something to do with Todd. Could this be another potential victim of Todd? Gray's dad seems cool. This storyline involving putting on a show could mean that we get to know him much better. Lots of setups for some interesting storylines. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Rich
2025-08-02 00:11:01 +0000 UTCJosh and Mark are a cute couple so far π₯° I love reading about them. It's very exciting
Mr Luigi
2025-08-01 20:32:38 +0000 UTCThis chapter is fun! The conversation between Mark and Gray is sooooo cute. I love that Mark wants to be hold by Josh π₯° i hope that some day that will happen
Mr Luigi
2025-08-01 20:27:37 +0000 UTCThere was something mentioned in a past year that students aged 16 or more can leave Kingswood on weekends in some limited capacity, right? I'm wondering because Nicki and Chris will turn 16 later this month. I'm torn between mad at David that they're still looking at those videos and being worried they may get caught and actually be expelled this time. What they're doing is wrong, but they're an interesting character that I'd like to keep. I don't know what's going with Shane regarding David, but he seemed to act much more naturally around Danny. Maybe it's because of David being nonbinary, which would suck for them. I'm proud of Nicki for his progress in body image. Actually managing to jerk off in front something like eight other guys, about half of which aren't from his dorm, is a big step for him. I'm interesting in the development of the exploration of sex issues in the Nicki/Gray and Mark/Josh couples. That's a kind of storyline that hasn't been explored, other than vague mentions regarding Josh. Chris being oblivious to the world around him while creating takes me back to when he stayed awake all night writing A Midsummer Night's Scream. He should learn to moderate himself, his inspiration won't suddenly completely disappear. I hope we get to see some of those interactions between him and with Blane that will happen more often this year, I like that pairing. It's cool that βThanks, Mr Trentβ seems like a normal sentence without context, while actually being really funny in how it was used. There's a lot of different storylines, these are the ones that came to mind, but I probably missed others that I'd also have stuff to say about.
Davide
2025-08-01 19:45:04 +0000 UTC
