The Kingswood Amelioration - Chapter 11
Added 2025-09-26 16:00:02 +0000 UTCComments
I keep wondering... could Chris really hold it for 5 weeks? Wouldn't he have wet dreams? He's 15 after all. I don't really believe he could hold that long without having any wet dreams...
Johnny Kape
2025-09-29 06:31:02 +0000 UTCI commented on Mikey regarding the Todd situation, it's time to tackle the rest. Still regarding Todd, Kingswood needs to do something to assure the parents they'll be more vigilant going forward. But I hope Mr. Everett doesn't actually get fired, and I think he won't. Having this bow up during the London trip was a nice writing trick to make it easier for you to skip over the boring assemblies about it. Giving us the news through text messages was both a good solution and funny. It was great to see Rob did the right thing by calling us Luke and Jazz on their bs. Rob isn't a saint by helping them both cheat, but they have a hell or nerve on calling him out when they're the ones who cheated. Good thing this only blew up after he had that talk with Mikey. This also shows progress for Rob, the old him would have probably bottled his feelings. The Chris and Danny stuff with Mr. Farrier and Mr. Fitzsimmons was hot. Teasing Chris is always fun, but I'm also glad Mr. Farrier eventually told Chris he likes him. Chris' self control in preventing himself from cumming and knowing exactly when he's getting too close to the edge is impressive. Some quick notes now. It's good that Mark is now aware of Josh's jealously, knowing something is necessary to handle it. I like Mr. Fizsimmons style of humour, I hope he'll still be the floor 3 master next year. The group's display against the homophobic guys at the theater was cool. I'm so happy Jorge gets to stay, guardianship is a good solution. (I can't see the name Mr. Fitzsimmons' without thinking of Fitz and Simmons from Agents of Shield, a couple that fans and even characters referred to as Fitzsimmons.)
Davide
2025-09-28 21:28:25 +0000 UTCTime for another comment. I'm also proud of Rob for calling out Luke and Jazz on their hypocrisy. I feel like that was a change for the better for Rob. Also, I tend to agree with him - I did like Luke a bit more than Jazz. Maybe it had to do with the cuteness of their initial relationship, there just seemed to be more than just something sexual there. It makes me so happy to see Josh getting closer to his old self each day. Academics may not be his strong suit, but his empathy and caring more than make up for it. I'm not so sure that in his friendship with Rob, that Josh isn't the one doing the majority of the supporting. It will be interesting to see what the fallout is from the whole "Todd thing" becoming a public issue.
Rich
2025-09-27 20:39:10 +0000 UTCMikey definitely seems to be winning some hearts recently. I never expected him to be so popular but I'm really glad that he is.
Matthew Smith
2025-09-27 09:36:11 +0000 UTCMikey continues to grow and develop and while I've always been excited to see who each of the characters develops into by the end of the story, I'm definitely most interested in Mikey.
Matthew Smith
2025-09-27 09:35:30 +0000 UTCI went to check the dates and we're 4.5 weeks into Chris' 5 weeks of not cumming.
Davide
2025-09-26 22:27:32 +0000 UTCI'll comment more later, but I have to second Rich's comment now. I'm so proud of Mikey, he hasn't just a lot of progress on his schizophrenia, he is also showing an incredible amount of maturity for his age in the way he's handling the Todd situation. When a teenager is very mature for their age, it usually means they went through hardships that forced them grow up faster. The schizophrenia, the abuse from Todd, and the way people acted towards him because of both all combined to that. Chris is still my favourite, but Mikey has grown up the most and became the most mature, something I would have never guessed at the start.
Davide
2025-09-26 17:32:39 +0000 UTCOnce again, I'm so proud of Mikey. As much as I love Danny (it is his superpower, after all), I'm at the point of tipping my favorite character status to Mikey. Since there are no other comments yet, I'll just leave this one here for the moment to give others a chance to read first.
Rich
2025-09-26 16:52:26 +0000 UTC
