Puck 489 - The 'Lost' Original Draft
Added 2019-04-12 02:19:40 +0000 UTCI said I'd post this glimpse at my first draft of Puck 489's last two panels, so here we are. Lots of tiny differences. Nothing too major. Note that I didn't have the original to go from when I was drawing it a second time.
Which ones do you prefer? I think I like the second take of the slap panel but the first take of the final panel better.
Comments
I did try to up the shock factor when I redrew it. The first take was a bit too neutral.
ElectricGecko
2019-04-14 14:53:44 +0000 UTCYeah, I'm on board with all of those choices. You have a good eye.
ElectricGecko
2019-04-14 14:52:59 +0000 UTCWell, glad I ended with the right choices, then.
ElectricGecko
2019-04-14 14:51:44 +0000 UTCI actually prefer the last version of the second panel, but that is purely because Phoebe's shocked look really tells us how devastated she was of even doing a weak slap.
Sylvician
2019-04-14 08:01:24 +0000 UTCI agree on the first panel. The second panel, I actually like Phoebe looking at the palm vs back of her hand, but do like Daphne's pose in the first take better (not putting her hand to her cheek).
FuryoftheStars
2019-04-12 12:39:10 +0000 UTC2nd take both panels
Philip D Jones
2019-04-12 03:26:35 +0000 UTC
