Thrown Back: Hermione's Return (Omake)
Added 2023-03-22 09:50:58 +0000 UTCThrown Back – Hermione’s Return (Omake)
H
Comments
This is a lot effort for an "omake" 😏.
Hadrian v.E.
2025-01-25 18:47:24 +0000 UTCOr Sirius :O
Hubert
2024-10-26 08:29:35 +0000 UTCI like it so much! Hermione would fit so well with project Save The World! And with Harry :)
Hubert
2024-10-26 08:26:16 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter. Wish it would be Canon in your Story
dogma4demon
2024-06-15 02:31:11 +0000 UTCI hope to have Hermione show up in the main story before they return to hogwarts for the 7th year
Ken Somers
2023-12-02 14:37:38 +0000 UTCI really do hope this doesn't stay just an omake, considering until today I was strictly AO3 me and another commented on this exact scenario in the comment sections, I couldn't believe you'd already written a chapter out beforehand, it was an amazing surprise and I greatly enjoyed it
TheFrenziedWolf
2023-11-09 06:35:22 +0000 UTCYou will officially become my favorite author if you get rid of that pesky omake at the end of the title... lol
Sean Brindley
2023-05-24 17:31:13 +0000 UTCPlease make it part of the story
Tushar Srivastav
2023-04-19 05:27:17 +0000 UTCI actually sorta wanted that to happen here a bit. Since Hermione is his back to back battle bitch like Bellatrix, his brainy muggle born crusader like Lilly. Narcissia fills the role that Daphne usually does in fanon. Of the smooth social operator insider which is a role that Harry lacks. I know that this a a smutty Omake but, Hermione grooving with Lilly as a study buddy/voyeur for a bit longer would have been my taste. Them getting down after the scene in sweet Yuri bliss. I felt a little cheated tbh
Peter Tierney
2023-04-17 16:46:28 +0000 UTCMake this an official ch.22 please or like an official episode later?
Basti Fortuna
2023-03-24 13:42:16 +0000 UTCI tend to stay away from son/mum time travel stuff fics, but this one is really good. Though, it's Minister Bagnold not Bangold unless this minister has some unlucky name, like Scar from the lion king or even Remus of this universe, where in her case she just loves having fun fun time with gold phalluses.
Basti Fortuna
2023-03-24 13:10:53 +0000 UTCHermione!!!! Yay! Frankly I would just love a story or well maybe a chapter of her just laying low Malfoy. Her and Bellatrix actually share a bit in common. Strong willed, intelligent, probably the most scary and dangerous of their respective groups. Loyal to a fault. I just don’t think it’s touched on as much as it should be. In general I like how Bellatrix is in this story. Sure Harry benefits but he’s not the main harem builder. It’s interesting cause I wouldn’t even say she’s becoming his right hand because she does so much on her own volition.
TC
2023-03-24 07:59:57 +0000 UTCThese are just for fun stories but I also feel hermione kind of undermines the whole time travel to the past. it is really not nearly as big a deal if his best friends come right along with him.
bo hamburgers
2023-03-23 15:29:50 +0000 UTCCouldn't agree more. There is plenty of Hermione stories out there, and ProffesorQuill has plenty of Hermione stories of his own. However, the current pairing is considerably rare. There is also the fact that if Hermione is included by the nature of how close her and harry are it tends to overshadow his other relationships.
bo hamburgers
2023-03-23 15:28:36 +0000 UTCI sincerely hope this is more of a spin-off than an addition of Hermione to the main story. Was really loving the dynamic of Cissa/Bella/Lily being the main three girls he loves and they are happy to have fun with other girls
bo hamburgers
2023-03-23 15:19:43 +0000 UTCWhy did you call Chapter 22 an Omake? Aren't those sidestories/spin-offs?
Pen Jr. Jr.
2023-03-23 13:33:58 +0000 UTCI agree. This was really good and everything but it’s nice that for once Hermione is not involved. This isn’t a knock on her but I’m enjoying thrown back the way it is.
James Trammell
2023-03-23 04:26:05 +0000 UTCUnlike everyone else, I dont think this should be canon to the main story because its rare to have a story without hermione being a major part of it and I have been relishing that.
Luca Ancona
2023-03-23 01:30:10 +0000 UTCIt just gets better and better
GhostnKC
2023-03-23 01:13:02 +0000 UTCThis is such a great twist in the story! I agree with everyone else saying this should be integrated into the main story!
Tony_of_House_Stark
2023-03-23 00:41:12 +0000 UTCWell done. Very well done.
Coady
2023-03-22 23:20:30 +0000 UTCWhat an amazing chapter
King hand axe
2023-03-22 21:53:31 +0000 UTCI must join my voice to the others. Your introduction of hermione made sense and felt natural. Her interactions with the girls and the overall situation felt organic and natural. This really is chapter 22 for me.
Starwalker29
2023-03-22 21:35:14 +0000 UTCGreat as always! Maybe make this experience a dream at first so you can still decide on it later.
faseastasiascasch
2023-03-22 21:16:03 +0000 UTCI agree with the others. Leave this as part of actual story. You made it work so well. So I also vote change title to chapter 22
Keith Hockla
2023-03-22 20:21:50 +0000 UTCAs much as I was hesitant to think Hermione being included into the main story, you actually made it work brilliantly. I generally get worried that whenever Hermione gets added to a ship she takes over because of their extremely deep friendship at a cost to his closeness with the others. But it didn’t feel that way in this chapter. Well done! Whatever happens either way if this becomes main or not it will be great. Cheers
Robert
2023-03-22 19:17:54 +0000 UTCWhile reading this I was thinking this is part of the main story right? RIGHT?!?
Fobbyasian
2023-03-22 19:10:30 +0000 UTCI’m glad you are still able to edit the story title as this definitely should be chapter 22. A great addition to the story and a great dynamic. For what was a random idea you really made it work!
Ironcoil
2023-03-22 19:02:44 +0000 UTCPlease please please do more
Benedict O'Neill
2023-03-22 18:29:31 +0000 UTCI spent far too much time nerding out over this story on discord. So I'm just going to limit myself to saying Thank you for this Quill. It a great story or chapter regardless of how folks want it. And the Italics works great
tornadoboy
2023-03-22 16:06:27 +0000 UTCI agree with everyone. Might as well retitle this Chapter 22 and make it part of the main story.
TheMightyClark
2023-03-22 15:40:54 +0000 UTCThanks for letting me know. Sometimes patreon screws them up.
Professor Quill
2023-03-22 13:03:54 +0000 UTCI'm sorry, this is Thrown Back: Chapter 22 right? I think you accidentally typed Omake. That's okay though, it's easy to fix that.
LionBro
2023-03-22 13:01:50 +0000 UTCDamn, there are no words for how much fun this one was. You didn't rush the payoff, and that made all the difference in making the situation feel more organic. I love the idea of Bella trying to seduce Hermione to make up for future actions, and it just worked extremely well. The action itself was incredibly hot and enjoyable to read. This is probably the one I most wish was canon to the actual story, because it's fun having another person with the future perspective. The italics worked great. It's immediately intuitive and simple.
Erinnyes
2023-03-22 13:01:32 +0000 UTCWish Hermione joining was canon for the story!
Aeden Emrys
2023-03-22 12:53:13 +0000 UTCThat was an intense chapter and i certainly would not be opposed to this just being the next chapter of the story!
Celexs
2023-03-22 12:41:23 +0000 UTCYESS!!! This would be so great to just make canon imo. That was the perfect mix of sweet fluff and sexiness
Ali G
2023-03-22 12:36:55 +0000 UTCI found a mistake in the title: It should be "Thrown Back: Chapter 22"
Bearsona
2023-03-22 11:26:15 +0000 UTCHell yeah, tbh
Iny Gendereater
2023-03-22 11:07:01 +0000 UTCAlso Would love this to be canon to thrown back! Hermione makes everything better!
Chichi son
2023-03-22 10:59:22 +0000 UTCSeeing such a fearsome witch like Bellatrix on her knees, willing allowing herself to be used for his pleasure, was incredibly arousing. willingly As Narcissa kissed her way up to her hot, damp mound, Hermione watched breathlessly as harry guided Bellatrix onto all fours with one hand gripped tightly in her hair. Without pause, he lined himself up with her entrance and sank in to the hilt. With her head being pulled back roughly, Bellatrix closed her eyes with a deep moan. as Harry guided A moment late,r she felt Harry’s hand on her hip and the tip of his member pressing against her entrance. Pulling her lips away from Bellatrix’s breathlessly, she closed her eyes, not sure what to expect. moment later
Chichi son
2023-03-22 10:58:34 +0000 UTC
