After her first truly unforgettable night, Astra puts everything else on hold β just to see him again... β οΈ
This is my first attempt at writing story and dialogue.
Iβm still figuring out the structure, pacing, and delivery.
Some parts may feel a bit rough or disjointed β for example, I definitely need to revise and improve the 5th page.
(dialogues in the manga will 100% be changed)
At the moment, the full chapter is planned to be 16 pages total.
Fun fact: I originally considered building the story around a QoS tattoo,
but looking at the long-term workload, I decided it would be too complex for this format β so I dropped the idea.
π¬ Still, I hope you enjoy this early attempt β
and Iβd really appreciate any feedback you might have.
Thank you so much for your support β it truly helps me grow and keep creating π