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恒例の月末深夜の更新です。今月もあまり新作を進めることはできず…。今の所このままメスガキものかなーと思っていますが…前回のメスガキから1作しか間をあけれていないので中々踏ん切り尽きません(本当は2作ほど挟むはずだったので…)それでも一応お冒頭2ページを構想してみました。ここだけで1か月唸りながら歩いてました…。いつもですが導入部というのは本当苦行です…。


最後のコマ、掴むのを首にしようか手首悩み中です…。いきなり首絞めちゃうと早々に怯えてしまうかなと。それも楽しそうではありますが。とりあえずスカトロまでに1回輪姦シーンを軽く描くつもりではいます。

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メスガキ以外だと先月もチラリと書いた個室トイレから響く絶叫シチュの子かなーと思っています。導入も少し浮かんでいます。


・ヒロインはクラスの2軍くらいの子で、トップカースト勢に憧れがある。

・なのでSNSからイケメンから声かかって有頂天

・楽しいデート

・イケメン「俺んちすぐ近くなんだけど遊びに来ない?大丈夫、今日は他にも人いるしさ、楽しいよ」

・大きめのマンションにドキドキしながらテンション上がってる

・ドアの向こうには大勢のオッサン、オモチャのようにされてる女の子達

・イケメンを振り返ると、「ちわー、お届けに上がりましたー」

・あいさつ代わりの輪姦

・終わったらトイレへ連れてかれる。途中でブルーシートのかかった担架とすれ違う。

・トイレには既にいた女の子一人、その子が泣き叫びながら個室へ入れられる

・やがて数人の男が個室に入って…絶叫が聞こえる

・絶叫の中小便器就任を告げられる。「頑張らないと、次の大便器は君だからね♡」


…こんな感じですかね。結構いい感じはしているのですがうんこ食わせるまでが少し長そうです。まぁ適宜個室の様子を挟むことになりますかね。でもためてためて…というのも盛り上がりそう。


とりあえず今月はこんなところです。未だ仕事の光明が見えないのですが…いい加減着手したいですね…。

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This is the customary late-night update at the end of the month. I haven't been able to work on my new works much this month... I'm thinking that I will continue to work on my new works as before. I'm still thinking that it will be a "mezgaki" story... but since there has been only one piece since the last "mezgaki", I can't make up my mind (I had planned to put two pieces in between...). I spent a month groaning and walking around just for this part.... As usual, the introduction is a real pain....





In the last panel, I'm wondering if I should grab him by the neck or by the wrist.... If I strangle him suddenly, I'm afraid he'll get scared too soon. It would be fun, though. I'm planning to lightly draw a gang-rape scene once before the scuttlebutt.

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I'm thinking of a girl who is not a female brat, but a screaming girl who echoes from a private toilet, which I wrote about briefly last month. I'm also thinking about the introduction of the heroine.


The heroine is a girl who is in the second group of her class and has a crush on the top caste girls.

She's a girl who is in the second group in her class and longs to be in the top caste.

She has a fun date with him.

The good-looking guy says, "I'm just around the corner, do you want to come visit me? Don't worry, there are other people here today, it'll be fun.

She's excited and nervous about her big apartment.

I was so excited to see the big apartment.

I look back at the handsome guy and he says, "Hi, I'm here to deliver you.

Gang rape as a way of saying hello.

When they were done, they were taken to the bathroom. On the way, we passed a stretcher covered with a blue sheet.

One girl was already in the bathroom, and she was put in a private room crying and screaming.

Soon after, several men enter the private room... and screaming is heard.

The girl is told that she will be inaugurated as a small or medium-sized urinal. 'If you don't do your best, you'll be the next big urinal ♡'


...I guess it's like this. I have a pretty good feeling about it, but it seems a little long until they make me eat feces. Well, I guess I'll have to interject the private room as needed. But I think it will be fun to see how they do it.


That's about it for this month. I still can't see any light on my work...but I'd like to get started....

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