【進捗報告】C103新刊8ページ
Added 2023-12-10 13:22:27 +0000 UTC新刊前半部分を終えたので公開です。残りは最低5ページです。金曜は徹夜で一気に進捗あげようと思ったところに風邪をひいてしまい…ただ大したことなくほぼ治りました。何とか今のペースで行けば若干の早割に間に合うので頑張りたいところです。できれば食糞部分をもう少しページ追加したいところです。せっかくお口ぬりぬりするのでもっと悶えて欲しいですよね。
しかしこうして見返してみると…うんち食わせてひゅーひゅー言わせてから吐かせてそれをまた食べさせて…他の作品でもやったような流れでワンパターンですね（笑）少しでも変化をつけたいところです。
解説なんかもやってみたくあるのですが画像アップするとBANされそうでできないのが残念です。それでも少し感想でも。元々食糞前の葛藤や便器に堕ちる絶望を感じてると悪露が大好きなのですが、今回は4ページ目のあの笑みを描きたくなりそこはバッサリ切りました。過去回想で描くことも考えましたが収まら無さそうで…なんであんな壊れちゃってるのか描いてみたいですねぇ…。
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I have finished the first half of the new book and it is now available to the public. There are at least 5 pages left. I was going to stay up all night on Friday to make progress, but I caught a cold... but it was nothing serious and I'm almost recovered. If I can keep up my current pace, I should be able to make it in time for the early bird deadline. If possible, I would like to add a few more pages to the feces section. I would like them to wriggle more since they are smearing their mouths all over the pages.
But when I look back at it like this...I made them eat poop and make them squeal and then make them throw up and then make them eat it again...it's the same flow that I've done in other works, and it's a bit of a pattern.
I'd like to do some commentary, but I'm afraid I can't because I'd be banned if I uploaded the images. Still, I'd like to share some of my thoughts. I originally loved the conflict before eating shit and the despair of falling into the toilet, but this time I wanted to draw that smile on page 4, so I cut that part out. I thought about drawing it as a recollection of the past, but it didn't seem to fit... I'd like to draw why she's so broken up...
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