Monthly Comic - Breed Mom (7,8,9)
Added 2023-06-24 15:00:06 +0000 UTC
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12 more pages of swimsuit shopping pls I am a new patron folder and you are my first I also miss to pole for it so pls more pages
nightmare souleater
2023-06-26 16:31:25 +0000 UTCLove the preggo sex and the xray shots! Page 9 was an instant neuron activation with that frontal view explosive finish, holy shit
spunkle
2023-06-26 10:04:27 +0000 UTCI love timeskips in general, so thank you π
PoseidonXcomics
2023-06-25 11:44:26 +0000 UTCAmazing. Hope we get to see her get pregnant a few more times
anonzen
2023-06-25 07:03:36 +0000 UTCThis is peak π
Miles Upshur
2023-06-25 06:38:42 +0000 UTCjust realized it was kind of rude for me to critique the blur thing...Sorry for doing that un-asked.
dorky
2023-06-25 03:41:34 +0000 UTCAs always, thanks for your input dorky! Blur and motion lines are something I have been experimenting with getting just right and I'm glad you enjoyed everything else so much!
Not Enough Milk
2023-06-24 21:38:01 +0000 UTCWood
Stephen
2023-06-24 20:32:55 +0000 UTCOh fuck, camera facing cock with an internal cumshot? Got me bricked up man this is the good stuff.
Boaty McBoatface
2023-06-24 19:03:13 +0000 UTCOH MAN, this just gets better and better! page 7: I LOVE THIS. That first panel is really good; the way his hand rests on her, the way his fingers stretch - it doesnt just feel like it's planted on her, it feels like it's slowly, smoothly touching and caressing her, like his fingers as slowly dragging along to tease her. So hot! And panel 2 is so fucking good. Mom looks INCREDIBLE and Jin looks great, too. They're both really excited and turned on, but for Mom that means she slowly, seductively kneels there, turns her head and levels a seductive stare and smile his way. But for Jin his body is moving frantically; he plants his feet and bends his knees, he leans in and tugs at his shorts, eager to strip them off and get inside of her. His eyes and smile look really good and show how giddy is his to fuck her and his energy is a lot of fun. But man, Mom looks incredible. I love her lips, I love her eyes, and I love the naughty, loving expression as a whole. She looks BEAUTIFUL and sexy and it's such an amazing face. Her body is a work of art; I LOVE her big, swollen, pregnant belly and her full, heavy tits, and most of all I love how heavily they hang. I think leaving her shirt on there makes that heavy hang even better, because it shows how her heavy body is stretching against her shirt. The shape of her belly is divine and sexy and her tits, too, and just...the way gravity pulls those heavy shapes SO much is so exciting! page 8: I LOVE the action here. Mom's pose in that first panel is so good! The way she arches her back and throws her head back,the way her hair flies around the way her face shifts from the calm, seductive look of the last panel to this intense grimace of pleasure lol - it all sells how intense this moment is. I love how her hips, thighs and BIG BELLY look here. Jin looks great, too, the way his body leans into her, the way he holds her shoulders, the focused look on his face. It's all so hot and so exciting. Something I notice in your art is when you use blur effects. Personally I'm not sure how I feel. On the one hand, they are very effective at communicating the sudden, frantic motion, but on the other hand they're a little distracting and obscure your art in a somewhat jarring way. I feel like your art doesn't "need" it - the way Mom's head jerks back doesn't need a blur to sell that fast motion, for instance. I wonder if the blur on her tits could be replaced by showing them bouncing a little, showing the shapes and lines themselves in just a little more motion. I don't know. The 2nd panel is great. The first has her body pushing out from the impact, and this one has her body getting pushed into the bed. I love the steamy look on her face; her eyes are a little wilder than in the previous page; her seductive sense of control has been broken into a blissfully vulnerable look. I love how her arms reach out, how her tits smush into the bed, and her belly and her butt look amazing from this angle. The way Jin's body curls around her, how he stares desperately at her is really fun, too. page 9: Internal shots aren't my favorite thing but I really love how you use them. First, the shapes and colors and lighting make those panels feel hot, heavy, muggy and writhing - the feeling of internal shots comes through well. But I like how they build tensiion and anticipation and get you revved up. From him just teasing her insides, to him pushing a little further, then BAM we see the gorgeous mess of ecstacy she's become and how big and exciting the moment is then back to the internal of him exploding inside her. The pacing of the action in this page is so good! I went overboard with the comment but I'm serious. I LOVE THIS. Mom is hot, the chemistry between her and Jin is great, and you draw her pregnant body so well. The way you tell a story wih comics is so, so impressive; it is really engaging and immersive because you know just what shots, angles and everything else to use to show the flow of the action. Amazing work!
dorky
2023-06-24 16:39:41 +0000 UTC
