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My Son's Girlfriend (Chapter 15)

Chapter 15: https://imgchest.com/p/md7owwr5d4p

๐Ÿ“– Chapter 15 is finally here! I hope you enjoy it. Only two more chapters to go before the end of the main story!

๐ŸŽฅ If you want the two versions like last time, let me know! I could create them in a few hours and post them tomorrow (In these versions, Jake texts both Alina and Michael).

๐Ÿ” A little detail you might spot: Throughout the second conversation, Alina has an unread message in her chat (yes, itโ€™s Jake). I originally planned to include a conversation between them at the end, but in the end, I felt this conclusion worked better. That chat will be part of the next chapter instead.

โš ๏ธ Quick note on the videos: This time, theyโ€™re all in H.264 format since one of you had trouble playing the H.265 files. Fingers crossed this works smoothly for everyone now๐Ÿ˜Š

My Son's Girlfriend (Chapter 15)

Comments

I completely understand... and honestly, the ending I wrote isnโ€™t necessarily the one I would have wanted either. But I do think itโ€™s the one most readers were hoping for (or at least expecting). To be fair, reading my stories will probably make you hate all my characters so much๐Ÿ˜‚ The bad ones always win, unfortunately. I did go a little softer in this story... but deep down, I just can't seem to let the truly good ones win๐Ÿ˜…

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The writing is fantastic and I am enjoying reading the story, but I am sure I will have the unpopular opinion. I hate the fact that the dad and the girlfriend are getting away with this. I get that Jake is a pussy for not standing up to his mom, letting her run all over his relationship, but the fact that the dad would do this to his sonโ€™s girlfriend and probably get away with it just pisses me off so much. As I said it is probably an unpopular opinion and again the writing is fantastic.

Blaine


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