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Added 2022-01-10 16:06:29 +0000 UTCThis page is honestly so cringe I tried to dilute it with some humor. What do you guys think?
Are you happy with how much HH content there is lately? Because I know I am.
Oh! An there's an ester egg here! do you see it???
Comments
I fixed the sentence! THank you! no no no! I get sad when I'm not corrected. Got really disheartened when nobody pointed the text mistake I made like 3 pages ago long after posting it.
Milk Assassin
2022-01-10 20:45:57 +0000 UTCthanks for letting me know! Not being a teenager anymore makes it harder to judge.
Milk Assassin
2022-01-10 20:43:12 +0000 UTCI agree with Abeille and Wonder!! These pages are amazing with no signs of cringe, and lots of humor! I am back with some grammar help too! In the first panel where they’re on the couch, instead of “uses your whole live energy up” “live” should be replaced with “life”, assuming you meant “life energy” like “life source” or “soul” I always feel so mean writing these posts, but I promise there’s no mal-intent when I write them. I just want to help you the best I can as an early reader, and I know you’ve asked for grammatical help in the past. I love your work so much!! 😩🤭❤️
Let's chill my dudes
2022-01-10 18:01:57 +0000 UTCAs always thank you for the HH blessing~ I don't think it's cringe either. It's a really well written take on his feelings of isolation. Being a teenager is hard enough, being a cosmic horror teen? That's a whole other of 'nobody understands me!'
Wonder
2022-01-10 16:40:54 +0000 UTC
