Goonmanji 2 - 69 - HD
Added 2018-01-08 07:29:17 +0000 UTCEDIT - People found the first version of this comic confusing, so I made some changes. The attached version with "v2" in the name is the current "official" version.
Like a persistent typo that has become invisible to its author, a mistake was made while playtesting that I kept missing right up until writing the commentary for this comic on the main site.
The next comic will address this, because it's not a simple text edit to fix. The error is that Police and Bunny are each 1-type cards, and neither on their own could replace Kid, a 2-type card.
I've already written the explanation comic, which has a moment I particularly like, and ultimately means we get to keep bunny-cop Susan without me trying desperately to add on a physical effect to a form that I, at least, am already happy with.
Comments
Wow This Is Very Interesting, Can't Wait To Read More
2018-01-09 06:26:21 +0000 UTCI like the parallel to Zootopia. Love that movie. But man, I just can't help but imagine Susan in that cowgirl form wearing this outfit instead. It's a tragedy that we never saw anyone with cowgirl and an outfit.
Serith
2018-01-08 19:13:45 +0000 UTCcould have hoped for something more judy hopps, really :)
David Howe
2018-01-08 18:48:19 +0000 UTCAh. See while that's a bit fanservicey, it's not terrible as far as police fanservicey outfits go. A miniskirt / visible bellybutton, maybe a shiny material might have put it over the top. ;) (Those are references to an absurd Japanese TV show about sexy cop ladies called "Miniskirt Police.". Because of course Japan has a show about sexy cop ladies.)
KiTA
2018-01-08 18:10:52 +0000 UTCShe was hoping for a realistic police outfit. What she got was a sexy cop costume. She says "jail" because she's annoyed, and it's a police costume. Susan is normally proportioned. Strong shadows on a tight outfit with her figure didn't look right. I have been rewarded for my attempt at realism with people questioning whether she's an adult again, which she is. The kid card has been replaced.
Dan Shive
2018-01-08 15:48:45 +0000 UTCI'm torn between laughing at this and the utter mood whiplash caused by reading this right after the story comic. :O
M.
2018-01-08 13:27:50 +0000 UTCFrom what Dan said on Twitter, it seems like Susan was expecting a more normal/modest police outfit after Catalina's nurse outfit. Instead, she got fanservice cop. :P <a href="https://twitter.com/elgoonishshive/status/950269511571247105" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://twitter.com/elgoonishshive/status/950269511571247105</a>
M.
2018-01-08 13:27:08 +0000 UTCI’m pretty sure she’s normally proportioned now, but it’s probably the short shorts she’s mad about.
Dragon Writer Luc
2018-01-08 13:25:02 +0000 UTCIt's probably because the outfit is....small...and Susan still appears to be childlike.
Kendra Kirai
2018-01-08 13:17:15 +0000 UTCOr the lower-than-regulation neckline.
Anthony Wilson
2018-01-08 11:13:31 +0000 UTCMaybe the outfit is very... snug?
Paul Rendell
2018-01-08 10:44:01 +0000 UTCYes, I feel like I'm missing something too. She seems awful embarrassed -- are daisy dukes really that embarrassing?
KiTA
2018-01-08 10:36:50 +0000 UTCI feel like I'm missing some sort of reference in the last panel. One might assume that it's a Zootopia reference, but I only saw that once, and don't remember many details.
coredumperror
2018-01-08 09:02:59 +0000 UTCWe had bunny-girl Susan just the other day. I sense a recurring theme here... (Also, do we know when the Dec Poll results are going up?)
James C
2018-01-08 07:49:51 +0000 UTC...you know, one could make a joke regarding the title number of 69 or the fact Susan got a bunny form
Matt R
2018-01-08 07:38:01 +0000 UTC
