Sequence - Susan to Other Susan

I don't mean this in a bad way at all, but in the 2nd stage she kinda looks like a crazy cat lady.

chris

Love her expressions as she goes through the changes.

Taran1s

Sweet.

What would be amusing (to me) is to have Susan do this sans hair growth and get very similar results. "Who knew?" And then, of course, we learn that Susan has been deliberately straightening her hair to keep it from getting wavy like it is in the second stage...

McClaw

Those biceps.....

Ryan Flores

you should absolutely make it canon. heck, I even know how you do it, provided the setup I'm describing can happen in canon. step 1: Susan and Diane have by this point been informed that they are, in fact siblings (this is where the plan falls apart, since you're the author and could easily have it turn out that, SURPRISE, they AREN'T related) step 2: Susan and Diane decide to try and get to know each other better. Susan mentions she's not super into fashion, and Diane won't let this stand. step 3: Diane drags Susan into a makeover and she comes out with that hair.

Connie Edogawa

Wow, Stage B has such floofy hair! Do it! Maybe, I don't know, she gets dragged to a salon by Nanase and Ellen, and goes along with it because eh, might be fun.

Kyman201

All the better to use the hammers. And look fabulous while doing it.

Edward Haag

After a closer examination, you're right. The dress is hiding just how much the hip is swung out. I still maintain she should have gained at least a little height. Those heels are pretty high.

Edward Haag

Speaking as the person who sketched it, including the building block shapes of her figure, she is absolutely in a pose that affects her height. She is cocking her hip quite a bit (compare how much her hip is sticking out on her right vs her left), and her torso isn't straight, either. Her pose is such that it accents curves in general.

Dan Shive

Yes. Do that. Awesome.

Doomed

No, she really isn't. She's got her hand resting on her hip, but it doesn't appear to be cocked at all, or if it is, it's so slight that it wouldn't be anywhere near enough to counteract the height increase from the heels. She just looks squished in the final frame.

Edward Haag

She's cocking her hips sexily, compared to standing straight up.

coredumperror

I... hadn't considered that. This... this changes everything...

J. Jenny Jameson

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Nabia Erickson

Sexy though the final form may be, I think I'll always prefer Susan Classic™

J. Jenny Jameson

I'm a bit confused by the shoes. She obviously went from being flat footed to wearing high heels, yet she doesn't seem to have gained any height.

Edward Haag

Plus, it would also help give Susan a bit more to differentiate herself from Diane.

Matt R

Canon in high humidity, perhaps? It's a great sequence - a lot more nuanced than I thought it'd be!

McZed

Wow, I don't know if it's part of the transformation, but man, Susan's got guns under those turtle necks :D

OftenSane

I vote yes for the hair!

Wildace88

If you want to make her hair in the second stage in the sequence canon, I'd say go for it, dude. It looks awesome!

Matt R