Nanase Craft - 50 - HD
Added 2019-02-13 06:18:42 +0000 UTCWhile there's a lot I do like about this storyline, it's made me rethink how I handle my planning for such stories and how / when to include more gratuitous transformations in general.
Like, yes, we can have them, buuuuuuut I feel I need to adjust my writing so the stories that contain them are better, and in some cases leave that for the sketchbooks / milestones (speaking of which, we should have some new ones of those next week).
Commentary
I was looking forward to the balancing scale nonsense, but I've found there isn't much I can really do with it that doesn't take too long and isn't repetitive or isn't just gratuitous, SOOOO... Bit of a montage followed by getting on with the conclusion.
That said, there will be a logic to what this section of the dungeon was all about before this is through, and I do like that bit.
Comments
The LAST thing we'd want is for you Dan, or us the audience to get oversaturated with transformation fun-times and "ruin" them for ourselves.
IvyReed
2019-02-13 22:54:08 +0000 UTCpanel one Sarah has really short fingers (and presumably toes) because the Nanase right next to her has longer than usual fingers and toes... right?
IvyReed
2019-02-13 22:51:34 +0000 UTCI can totally get behind wanting more story to NP comics. I'd just like to see the grade of gratuitosity stay constant. :)
John Trauger
2019-02-13 19:58:59 +0000 UTCAww, but I like repetitive things (so long as the thing that is being repeated is a good thing).
Chronos Cat
2019-02-13 19:04:55 +0000 UTCMaybe Sarah looked as un-canine as possible. O_O
Stephen Gilberg
2019-02-13 15:28:43 +0000 UTCPudgy Nanase with doggy ears is even cuter.
Kevin Wright
2019-02-13 14:29:06 +0000 UTClol, this reminds me of one of the last parts of the first Goonmanji. Overall, this story is considerably more like the original Goonmanji story than the second Goonmanji story.
Daryl Sawyer
2019-02-13 13:33:57 +0000 UTCSarah probably looked like she did in panel one given Nanase's form in panel 2 should be the rebalanced result.
Scotty
2019-02-13 13:10:27 +0000 UTCmy headcanon is that Nanase was given that form because she had to dig for the next button or doorway.
Scotty
2019-02-13 13:04:25 +0000 UTCyou say Gratuitous like its a bad thing
Jere
2019-02-13 12:44:19 +0000 UTCI am frightened of and unquenchably curious about what Sarah looks like by comparison.
IvyReed
2019-02-13 12:32:42 +0000 UTCI do love uneven growth, especially big feet. Pity it's so rare.
Gen-Awesome
2019-02-13 12:11:05 +0000 UTClol, I have to wonder where the heck anthro-doggy form could have possibly come from, in terms of balancing. Not that I'm complaining. :)
coredumperror
2019-02-13 11:12:07 +0000 UTCNanase makes a cute pooch, but pudgy Sarah is just adorable!
Seadog Driftwood (Casey)
2019-02-13 06:41:53 +0000 UTC
