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Added 2022-06-04 03:00:02 +0000 UTCBig changes!
Commentary
Actual Grace with short hair in canon might happen.
Almost certainly with less or no makeup, but still.
Plans of Dan
I started this storyline as "it would be funny if Ashley wrote some Original Characters lacking in originality" without any solid plan on where it would ultimately go.
Now I'm fast thinking I should establish enough about this setting and its OCs so some future EGSNP storylines can be based on stuff Ashley's written.
Probably toned down adaptations in some ways, but still!
Comments
"Huh, how did I not notice how busty Grace is? I was *sure* I exaggerated her starting attributes. I guess I need to go back and revise them..."
Some Ed
2022-06-05 02:12:12 +0000 UTCGrace could literally help by standing in front of her and changing her body as Ashley tells her to - like a human character-creation screen
Platus
2022-06-04 18:52:47 +0000 UTCOoooo I like the short hairstyle!!
Mink Rose
2022-06-04 15:33:54 +0000 UTC"Narratively convenient enviable starting attributes" are indeed a good place to start. :) Hoping things go up from there.
M.
2022-06-04 14:25:39 +0000 UTCPoor Ashley will flip the first time she notices Grace using "conveniently enviable starting attributes" to test change blindness. The parallels between truth and fanfiction have begun!
Narzain
2022-06-04 10:01:47 +0000 UTCinb4 Ashley describes this to Grace and she takes the form for funsies. also, short haired not-Grace is cute in panel 3 and then panel 4 hits even more positive buttons for me.
Connie Edogawa
2022-06-04 03:46:21 +0000 UTCHmm...she would probably look better with medium length hair than short if she's meant to be different from Grace
Matt R
2022-06-04 03:44:09 +0000 UTC... yeah, can't say I'm a fan of short haired Grace. The makeup and expression don't help, but even without it she looks... not wrong per say, but not at all right
AstroChaos
2022-06-04 03:21:19 +0000 UTCThey can crossover with the AF04 crew. ;-)
Adama
2022-06-04 03:17:01 +0000 UTCI think I prefer the OG.
Stephen Gilberg
2022-06-04 03:05:18 +0000 UTC
