Jaundis

Thoughts on monster gal content? Yes? No?

Added 2022-06-12 00:37:39 +0000 UTC

Before starting on Streaming a Feeding, I'd decided that if I was gonna do a lamia fic, I would do a LAMIA fic, not just a regular fic with a gal who happens to have snake bits. That meant doing stuffs that aren't in my usual fics that y'all might not vibe with, like the jaw unhinging, the 'move stuff from human tum to snake tube' bit, the raw meats, my not shying away from mentioning her scales, and the bit at the end with how Cass ate the turkey. But the question is... did I go too far? Did I ask what I could do instead of what I SHOULD do?

I've gotten a good amount of likes on the fic, which makes me confident enough to want to write for her (and other monster gals like her) again sometime, but I think I should also straight-up ask just in case: How did y'all like the level of detail relating to Cass being a snakey lady? More monster details and descriptions? Less? The same? Fuck snakes? Lemme know!

And of course, if you have specific things that you like or didn't like, I'd love to see a comment about it! I don't respond to comments very often since my social energy is always borderline empty and formulating responses eats up that tiny bit of energy mad quick, but I promise that I always read and appreciate them!

Just as an example, a bit of feedback I got from a generous test reader was that the raw meat stuff was kinda uncomfy but they wanted more in-depth descriptions of the Cass' snakey half being stuffed and bloated.

I'll review all feedback to know just how inhuman I should go on future monster gal fics. Thanks and much appreciate~