Unexpected pg 24 Sketch
Added 2019-08-16 06:19:52 +0000 UTCCat's outta the bag I guess! 0.0
This one was tough. I'm trying to get better with facial expressions. Still not quite sure I'm 100% happy with this page yet, but hopefully by the final pass I'll have it down :)
Comments
Ashley has a weird head in the 4th panel .. She looks too angry. She's supposed to want to help Sue, while there it looks like she wants to kill her. lol
Dogueraz
2019-08-17 00:55:22 +0000 UTCI might pull it back a bit in the final pass 😉 My attempt is to keep the intensity of the situation up
WereWorld
2019-08-16 16:39:38 +0000 UTCAshley comes across as WAY too hostile....
Brian Thomas
2019-08-16 16:25:01 +0000 UTCStill hoping she doesn't change and this all ends with her in a mental hospital.
DogGirlKari
2019-08-16 11:22:23 +0000 UTCwell who thinks thers going to be a witness to the change I hope so hopfuly Ashley survies and joins sue in her wolfie full moon madness
Eric Young
2019-08-16 11:22:20 +0000 UTC@timothy lets hope so bro
Lewis Bond IV
2019-08-16 11:10:08 +0000 UTC"Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.” - Carl Sagan Hopefully Ashley gets the hint while/if there is time to do so.
Kerlem
2019-08-16 11:06:01 +0000 UTCYeah, I'd say the one facial expression which could use some work would be Ashley's in the 4th panel. Otherwise, the others are all pretty cool. :D
Goblinounours
2019-08-16 08:50:43 +0000 UTCSo much for subtlety, right?
Spotts1701
2019-08-16 06:35:04 +0000 UTC
