Eternal dream Chapter 16 Part 2
Added 2023-06-23 14:05:14 +0000 UTC
Comments
As Zero Two said it needed some improvements she meant stuffing the breasts so that Hina-chan's bust would appear larger. So it's cotton wool.
Ron512
2023-06-24 18:28:30 +0000 UTCgreat as usual! did the outfit make her breasts bigger, or just appear bigger?
B
2023-06-24 17:31:23 +0000 UTCNo harm done. I really like all the comments, thanks to them I know where I make mistakes and know how to fix them later besides they often give me a lot of inspiration.
Ron512
2023-06-23 23:41:03 +0000 UTCI'm sorry but I have to. My suspicions have been confirmed if we're talking about caged something. I'm just curious about Zero-Two's (well, Saki-chan's too) reaction when she finds out. But about the rest. Let's begin the process of birth of a new idol. Even Hina-chan got fire-up. We had an interesting future ahead of us. Oh and Saki-chan's imagination from the 58 pages of the previous chapter are slowly fulfilling. Big up, and I am always waiting for more.
mrG4bka
2023-06-23 17:47:08 +0000 UTC
