The Chronicles of Nimo - Chapter 2 - p04
Added 2022-05-09 18:58:03 +0000 UTCChapter 1 start / Chapter 2 start
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Thanks for the help, well I need to re-write it first, as I see improvement, it differs already from the original script & storyboard. I din't remember it was tricky to tell a tale in the past form + what should have been done. I get back to you when I focus on the dialogues, thanks Thomas!
CLX
2022-05-20 04:54:35 +0000 UTCOh you know what's to come, don't you?
CLX
2022-05-20 04:52:11 +0000 UTCYes, the English needs a reworking. I can help but I would need to know the whole story concept. The words in the middle have to relate to the beginning and the end to keep the context, direction and tone.
Thomas Polk
2022-05-18 00:56:55 +0000 UTCJust an appetizer???
Thomas Polk
2022-05-18 00:53:32 +0000 UTC
