Makaio Prologue Update
Added 2022-06-06 13:59:01 +0000 UTCMakaio's prologue is up for this tier. Keep in mind that this prologue is a rough draft and will probably see at least two more rewrites before actually being in a place where I'm happy. This means that variables are likely to be taken away, added, and changed. As well as a few themes, motivations, choices, etc. For all I know, entire parts may be removed.
So, simply keep that in mind as Makaio receives these early updates.
ALSO please first check that your link is valid before messaging me about the link not working. There is a masterlist of links pinned on my page. Go to Collected Beta Links for the updated links.
Comments
I liked the prologue, but once it was over it seemed to bring me directly to Zarik’s route starting right after his prologue.
Dani
2022-06-06 19:04:33 +0000 UTCI have had the phearn for half a day, and if anything happened to it I would kill everyone in the tower and then myself. The setting for Makaio's prologue is so interesting, and I absolutely eat up every little bit we learn about Bane. I'm so so so curious to the role she plays in this route specifically, and depending on how much stays the same this phoenix might just be my favorite(sorry Nour </3). I can already tell Makaio's route is going to feel pretty different compared to the others (the fact that she isn't the one who rescues the phoenix directly from the tower changes the story dynamic in a way I adore) and I'm excited to see where it goes.
Makayla Murray
2022-06-06 14:23:02 +0000 UTC
