jamminrabbit

Community Feedback for Potential New Series

Added 2021-03-14 03:03:51 +0000 UTC

So for those of you who have been with me for a long time know that my head is just swimming with ideas. Maybe not as grandiose as other authors, but enough to make a reader rip out their hair and go, "You're going to write another?" or "Focus on what you're writing now!"

Some authors focus on one or two stories and write them for a very long time, I kinda of just want to write as much as possible.

Which brings me to what I wanted to talk to you guys about: I have another story in the works LOL.

Unfortunately, it's not what I usually write, which is smut with some plot. This is uncharted territory for me, so I figured who better to ask than readers.

It's LITRPG in a contemporary setting Yes, that genre. I'd like to try my hand at it.

The premise is of a reluctant third year student who narrowly escapes from being eaten by monsters after she is given the opportunity to transform into a magical girl. She accepts, and it turns out there is a whole system behind the powers, with a progression system and everything.

Magical Girl Kari: Apocalypse System

It's a dark story, and I'm not sure if anyone currently subbed to me would enjoy it. I just want to hear from others what sort of pitfalls to avoid, things other stories have done right that I could apply or done wrong that I should watch out for.

Or maybe this premise sounds like shit and you're welcome to outright tell me. But I'd like to hear two-cents from other perspectives.

I've already written like 6 chapters, and if you're interested, I can dump them all here for those interested in a magical girl litrpg. Just let me know!

Thank you all ahead of time!