Rookie Dragonborn's Free Shopping Spree (HD 9-12p)
Added 2025-02-26 14:11:52 +0000 UTCBefore February is nearly over, I have finished a part... Does anyone have any suggestions?
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Actually, in the original version, there was a page jump between pages 9 and 10. However, after considering it, I decided to remove it because I felt it disrupted the flow of the plot/shot.
bnnnnxg19
2025-02-27 07:09:17 +0000 UTCI think we can add the act of jumping off the wall and spreading legs，between pages 9 and 10( ˶'ᵕ'˶)
南斋孤云
2025-02-27 05:10:43 +0000 UTCYeah, there are still many enemies ahead, and some interesting plot twists or cliffhangers!
bnnnnxg19
2025-02-26 15:37:50 +0000 UTCI especially like your painting of unbirth, hope to see more in the future(*´﹃｀*)
南斋孤云
2025-02-26 15:20:16 +0000 UTC
