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Halfway through... time for a poll

With page 53 coming out, we're now halfway through Helluva Trio. (Yes, there's 106 pages!)

I'm currently working on scripting the sequel, but I'd also like to work on a second comic for variety's sake.

Here's a couple of ideas for another comic. Which do you think will be most popular?

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Normally, I'd say "don't put your dick in that," but sometimes, you've just gotta gamble.

P1: She opens her mouth. A detailed shot of her mouth, her tongue rolled out, saliva strings and drool spilling.

P2: Millie watches on in amazement.

P3: Loona takes the first half of Moxxie's dick in her mout...

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I like that Loona was actually listening to Millie and didn't question how kinky her demands were. I think that at this point, she subconsciously just wants to prove that she's a good girl who pays attention.

P1: Moxxie shudders.

MOXXIE: W-wow...

P2: Loona's eyes widen, her tongue still crawling u...

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Loona finally gets the taste she's been craving.

This page took a long time to draft because I've been feeling burnt out the past couple weeks. Spent most of my time doing completely random drawings, just trying to enjoy art again and pretend for a little while that I don't have responsibilities. 

But I think...

Oum invitation

I think these might be a little too scandalous for my SFW account so I'll post it here.

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Now that we're halfway through this comic, I want to start planning and scripting for the next comic. Ideally, I'd like to run two comics side-by-side, to aim for a larger audience.

But I'm unsure what the next comic should be, so I'll eventually make a poll. I'd like to hear your input on what you think it should be ou...

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It's amazing that she's done this so often, that she's able to talk with her mouth full like that.

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Millie always had a streak of sadism to her.

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Finally taking turns.

This second half will allow Loona to shine... but there's still going to be a few hiccups along the way.

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Loona's being given a nice little view. I wonder if the reason why Millie never gets much upset when others mock Moxxie's size is because she knows he has no reason to be self-conscious.

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I even made Millie's horns go up straight, to illustrate the boner this situation is giving her.

Someone suggested adding a beat between panels 2 and 3, to help show Millie calming herself. It's a little cramped, but I think it helps overall.

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Millie's tagging out.

We're finally at the halfway mark. There's going to be a total of 106 pages. Yeah, I was surprised too.

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P1: Millie closes her eyes and lowers her head, taking more of his shaft.

P2: She raises her head back.

P3: She now has Moxxie's dick head resting on her tongue.

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Millie giving a lesson on cock worship.

Sometimes, I need to fuck around with the size difference between the characters to make the composition make sense and still be interesting. I think that, even with the perspective, Millie is a bit larger compared to Loona.

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P1: Millie turns around to put herself ...