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Helluva Trio 2 pg 16 inks (commentary)

Back to Loona's fantasies.

This is also setup for the future, but we'll have to wait and see how it plays out.

I'm really enjoying drawing with this pen. The thickness of the lines is harder to control, but presents an interesting challenge.

Helluva Trio 2 pg 6 inks

Helluva Trio 2 pg 16 draft (script)

P1: Loona imagines herself giving Moxxie a titjob.

LOONA: If they invited me again... I'd show Moxxie just how awesome my tits are...

P2: She imagines straddling over Millie's face, grinding her crotch onto Millie's face.

LOONA: If they want me... I'd play a little rough with Millie and see how she ...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 6 draft

Helluva Trio 2 pg 15 (commentary)

I'm envious of her abs.

I'm not 100% certain if panel 2 sells the illusion that we're seeing through the surface that's leaning on. Partly because she's actually leaning against a sink, and I forgot that fact when I was drawing this, and drew it more like a counter instead. My bad.

Looks like I forgot to color her...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 5 sneak peek

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 5

Helluva Trio 2 pg 15 inks (commentary)

Loona finally taking a moment to reflect on herself, and her body.

With this page, I've started using a new brush! I'm really happy with this one. It gives more variety to the line weight and adds some personality to the brush strokes. To me, the image ends up looking more alive and active than with my previous b...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 5 inks

Helluva Trio 2 pg 15 draft (script)

P1: She's now playing with her breasts as she continues.

LOONA: Maybe it's because... they're older than me? And they seem so well put-together... like ideal parents...

P2: She stretches to a comfortable position to continue.

LOONA: And I guess I... felt safe with them? It felt like they were taking care of ...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 5 draft

Helluva Trio 2 pg 14 (commentary)

The purpose of this moment is to slowly set up Loona's lack of self-control. She's at work, she's striking out with the couple she wants to hit it off with, but she tends to get lost in lust. It'll help explain some of her actions later on in the story.

...also the fact that there's been a number of non-NSFW pages and I...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 4

Helluva Trio 2 pg 14 inks (commentary)

You have those moments where you wish you could relive your memories, or at least recreate them in your head as though it was a perfect recording?

They say the sooner you replay them in your mind, the more likely you are to remember the details.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 4 draft

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 12 draft (script)

P1: Talani licks Haeun's mound.

TALANI: Hmm. Hmmm.

P2: She trails her tongue up Haeun's navel.

P3: Her tongue licks Haeun's underboob.

P4: And she takes her nipple in her mouth.

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 7 draft

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 10 (commentary)

Ten pages in and I'm still really, really nervous about this comic.

It's no secret that audiences generally don't care for new things. Typically, they wait for something to become more established and popular before they give it a read. I've already posted the first few pages online and they're only doing a fraction as ...

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 6

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 11 inks (commentary)

Finally, the more adult pages begin.

There's also a SFW version of this comic. For this instance, Sylara and Ares catch Haeun and Talani making out instread, and the situation as a whole is much tamer.

Talani is only using one finger here, but considering her size, I think it's going to be more than enough.

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 6 inks

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 11 draft (script)

P1: In the foreground, we see Talani on her knees, pinning Haeun to a tree, fingering her. Haeun's shirt is open, exposing her breasts. In the background, we can see Sylara and Ares spying on them.

HAEUN: Ahh! Ahhhh... ohhhh...

P2: Ares and Sylara watch on in shock

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 6 draft

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 5

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 10 inks (commentary)

They're not going to shy away from danger if one of their friends is in trouble. Sylara is a bit of a scaredy-cat, but she'll always step up if it's up to her.

Ares is naturally protective, it's just kind of in his nature at this point. It's a trait he picked up from his time with Sylara. He definitely wasn't this heroi...

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 5 inks

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 10 draft (script)

P1: Sylara clings to Ares. They face towards thick bushes and trees.

SYLARA: What was that!?

ARES: I don't know... it kind of sounded like...

P2: The pair look at each other as the moaning continues.

ARES: Haeun.

SYLARA: W-we should check to see if she's okay.

P3: The two step into the fol...

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 5 draft

Helluva Trio 2 pg 13 (commentary)

Look at that. We're back in the bathroom that Loona skulked away in the first comic. Except now, she's got something new frustrating her.

The point of all this is for Loona to kind of realize that there are things she didn't predict in all her fantasies. Relationships and sex are messy things, figuratively and literally...