Gimme characters for September's poll
Warming up: every character you want give in the comments (you can do multiple but I'll pick the one I know or the one that fits my style more). The limit is 25 characters.
Starting Round...
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Bug Bite will be back
BUT... I decided to go fully monochrome for the comic, after all this time thinking, this comic to look more as a manga it would benefit a lot on the development of the story and the speed of the releases, I'm totally against quantity over quality but this project as a fully colored comic is too much for me alone, so I'll sim...
2025-08-29 14:30:48 +0000 UTC View Post
Midna
Poll winner of August
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Starting Round / August's character poll
The best three go to the final round, multiple choice is ON.
Gimme characters for this month's poll!
Warming up: every character you want give in the comments (you can do multiple but I'll pick the one I know or the one that fits my style more). The limit is 25 characters.
Starting Round:
2025-08-01 14:21:23 +0000 UTC
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Thanks a lot for the Criticism!
After reading all of the comments I could gather the mayor issue of the ending of Rock Bottom.
What I lacked was the very development of the twist from the sexual drive of the story to the heavy subjects and the emotions Rio felt over the time with Cinder. It was missing dialogues, inner thoughts and way extra pages.
Criticism
One of the things I would love is to get honest criticism of the writing I'm trying to develop in my stories, by that I mean, speaking with knowledge of the subject someone is talking about, or just understand some of writing in general.
I don't wanna take criticism as the "I do not like this, because is not what I ...
Rock Bottom (67)
The End.
This was a cool experience, I wasn't expecting this story that started as a "mini" comic would develop this much over time.
I should work on the cover of RB soon!
