Song for today "Epitaph" from the band King Crimson. Rawr!
Edit: Huge continuity error I made around Maagneil. He is the father of Broggart, so the uncle of Grimnir., not his cousin. Which means, the bac...
2022-12-18 03:17:00 +0000 UTC View Post“… Envy isn’t responding.”
“It doesn’t matter. Begin the council.”
Tarnished, harrowing, and macabre—these were a couple of adjectives the world outside of Bole’Taria would describe the demonkin’s home. A nation infested with eldritch horrors, sick beings, and twisted architecture. A Folschreck...
2022-12-15 04:08:32 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Syntax and added the changes to how Hestia let Vifi go
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[“… You are not ready yet, Saori.”] His voice echoed in my head, souring my mood as I stared at his stone statue. The dark, musty smell of this plain, underground cave I was trapped in made his word...
2022-12-13 00:37:44 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Ellaine's Profile update after being away from Hestia added at the end.
Edit 2: Continuity error fixed.
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“Here.”
Ellaine handed to me something that appeared to look like an egg. This beige, spotted “egg” felt warm to the touch, but its shell w...
2022-12-10 02:43:54 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Some continuity error fix
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The scene was turbulent, filled with furious, pained, and confused cries. Grimnir’s mana blast had sundered the earth, destroying a small section of it before the blue barrier protecting this hold flickered back in sight. The damage to the road wasn’t restore...
2022-12-07 02:47:17 +0000 UTC View Post<[Battle Frenzy (Minor)] inflicted on [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]>
<Mana Release activated. Aura used as control unit: [Draconic Aura Lv. 4]. Territory [Magmakammer] has been established>
<Proficiency requirement fulfilled.
Edit: Big changes! I did allude to them with my want for feedback. But, yes, people called the First Draft a connecting chapter, a filler chapter. However, while I knew that, it felt slow and unneeded. Sure, Dragon Idol is a slow burner, but even for my standard, that was not good content.
So, I still kept the connector...
2022-11-30 05:01:04 +0000 UTC View PostHappy late turkey day. Gobble gooble.
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“Hesti-chan!”
“Kazumi-chan! Kohaku-chan!”
The voices of two girls pierced through the raucous roars echoing inside this stone house. Despite being backstage and inside a room that rocker Rosserto lent to us to rest in, you could hear his...
2022-11-27 02:53:51 +0000 UTC View Post“Speak or die.”
“Grwak?!” The dwarf didn’t respond correctly, so I slammed his head into the stone floor, quickly realizing from the lack of a dent that something was protecting the floor. “Ghuuurk! Aka!”
“Boss!!!”
Hmm? But, from the sounds of it, the damage I inflicte...
2022-11-22 03:16:35 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Added the changes on how Hestia let Vifi go
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“Mhmm, Hestia … Don’t worry, Mom is here for you, ehe.” She kissed my check, even wrapping her tail almost instinctively around mine. Almost as if the warmth of my body was agitating her to move. “Once...
2022-11-19 04:22:35 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: I've changed what is written on the newspaper
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“Her shadow consumed you two?”
“At first, yes. Wrapped itself around us like a cocoon, just like how monsters evolve. The goddesses didn’t really tell us anything, simply suggesting that Sensei ‘just do it.’ Well, it’s ...
2022-11-16 03:25:21 +0000 UTC View Post“Grrraaaaaaaaa!”
Appraise them!
<Lv. 72>
<Lv. 54>
<Lv. 89>
Buffs!
<[Various Spell Buffs] inflicted on [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]>
‘Fuck them up, Original Mind!’ my parall...
2022-11-13 04:12:16 +0000 UTC View PostHey, everybody, somebody had suggested that I post a list of all the songs and their lyrics. So, here they are. I also included the description of Hestia's spell songs, too. I will be adding any new songs in here.
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A Sea of Trees - A Whole New World (Aladdin)
I c...
2022-11-10 21:10:25 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Since I changed the Job System, here is also the new updated ones. It's new and fun looking, so have a look! At the start and around the ending.
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<Experience for development Jobs has reached multiple breaking points.
[Idol]: Lv. 0 -> Lv. 10 |...
2022-11-09 23:57:49 +0000 UTC View PostEnjoy! Took a bit to outline and iron out the details, but enjoy the new uniques! Uniquer!
Edit: Took the feedback and adjusted the new Unique Job System. Took in account how I could better implement the System into the story and create future drama and plot points. While also keeping it sensible for the world. 2022-11-06 23:12:56 +0000 UTC View Post
<Multiple proficiency requirements fulfilled. [Continuous Cast Lv. 6] [Mana Eyes Lv. 7] [Benevolent Aura Lv. 6] gained>
<423 human and beastman have become your followers>
<Total follower count updated. Total followers of [Y...
2022-11-03 22:25:53 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Smart Hestia is best Hestia. Changes to when Uzerra left.
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“Mhmm! Mhm, yup, this is delectable.” The pj-wearing elf slurped up the spaghetti in a manner like he was eating ramen, only for Tasianan to quickly correct his action by teaching him how...
2022-11-01 02:59:52 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Changed the Divine Quest reward into something more meaningful of a reward
Edit 2: Also added Neill mentioning forcing Vifi into an oath and have Hestia stand by her decision.
Edit 3: Added the changes I had made in how Hestia let Vifi go.
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<Un...
2022-10-30 02:40:50 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Some syntax edits and also changes done in accordance with chapter 362's changes.
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“So, Qaltil is dead and we failed the job.”
“Right, boss—Urgh …”
“… Well, at least you’re alive. Although missing an eye, a leg, and having your stomach nearly separated in...
2022-10-26 21:33:42 +0000 UTC View Post“Ooooooh, my goodness…”
In the divine realm of the Goddess Aurena, the goddess in question herself fell back on her chair with a relieved expression. She lightly slapped her spotless face, moving it up and down in an attempt to calm herself. She opened up a single eye, watching Hestia’s participation in the Elyo...
2022-10-25 01:38:29 +0000 UTC View PostEdit Logic fix with the [Room] runes.
Edit 2: I changed the ending and how Vifi'Yok's and Hestia's discussion ended. This was to keep true to Hestia's personality without making it seem too idiotic from a character point-of-view. I will be using this change to alter the future chapters.
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<... 2022-10-22 20:45:27 +0000 UTC View PostWhat a fitting scenery.
A lava field had consumed the island below, turning water into hardened rock and earth for platforms. As toxic gases and lava fountains threatened anything below, boulder-sized molten earth began to levitate up to the sky, joining the intricate web of dragon paths. As such, a small island, just l...
2022-10-20 02:07:35 +0000 UTC View PostExtra long since the last chapter had been a while. I mean it when I say long. As in, longer than my usually long chapters. Enjoy and take your time.
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Even as [Dragon Fire] continued playing through my [Telepathy], my three comrades next to me began to panic as th...
2022-10-16 22:51:32 +0000 UTC View Post<[Prayer (Major)] [Music Resonation (Moderate)] [Various Spell Buffs] inflicted on [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]>
A giant water beam shot right out of Karhalantheel’s mouth, soaring through the stormy skies at the silver dragon dancing in the air in front of i...
2022-10-10 00:59:29 +0000 UTC View Post<Experience has reached multiple breaking points. [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]’s Secondary Job [Flame Lancer] has risen from [Level 12] to [Level 20]>
<Attributes have increased due to level up>
<Max level of J...
2022-10-06 12:25:10 +0000 UTC View PostIf you haven't read last chapter's second draft yet, please do.
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The most common type of grimgarian were the goblins and kobolds. Ogres, trolls, even orcs weren’t as often seen on human soil mainly due to the hunter’s guild targeting those grimgarians, as they were more threatening th...
2022-10-02 15:59:29 +0000 UTC View PostHey everybody,
I just wanted to inform you guys I will be going on plane to visit my grandparents soon. The flight will take a while, and I would also like to have some time for the family reunion, so the next chapter will take a while. I'll continue the chapter releases during my vacation whenever I can, as I do wanted...
2022-09-25 21:21:59 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Pretty much a rewrite of the chapter since I didn't like how I did it. Flowed less well, and I think I put the character focus on the wrong characters. As such, it's pretty much a new chapter.
Also, since I am still on vacation, it took this long. To be honest, I rewrote this yesterday, but decided against releasi...
2022-09-25 02:04:36 +0000 UTC View PostSince it's played so often, just gonna have to remind you guys. Les Miserable "Do you hear the people sing" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2crRmKlbfxM&t=88s
Edit: Addition to the ending. Wrapping up some loose ends.
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2022-09-22 00:30:25 +0000 UTC View PostEdit: Concerning last chapter
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“Kuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh!”
“Kraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”
Mother was above me one second and clashing with the leviathan in the next, creating a massive shockwave with the force of the blow. Another tsunami was created from ...
2022-09-18 03:39:34 +0000 UTC View Post
