Here is the manuscript for chapter 2 - WARNING: It's super long lol about 10 pages
Tell me what you think in the comments, I always love reading them and responding when I can and feel the need to :)
Enjoy!
-Ana
Chapter 2
Danny is shocked to see Lily. “Lily…...
2023-11-05 07:39:36 +0000 UTC View Post
Thanks everyone that gave me constructive criticism for the last part. I'm much happier with this version and it would've been a flop without you! I took many shortcuts the first time and I made sure to take my time and rethink the whole scene. I feel it's more impactful and now sets up events that will recur later in the serie...
2023-11-05 07:29:01 +0000 UTC View PostI took the day to think about the first part of the chapter involving Lily's mom, and gave the whole scene much consideration. I added a bit of backstory through dialogue and tried to make it feel more like an argument advancing to a fight.
I appreciate any more feedback to make this even better and more imp...
2023-11-04 05:13:31 +0000 UTC View PostI've gotten feedback on the latest chapter, and I'm taking the day to think about it. I took shortcuts that backfired drastically. I'm gonna rewrite the scene and mostly redraw it.
Thanks for the feedback.
-Ana
2023-11-03 20:44:41 +0000 UTC View Post
Reunited at last! Some shots with Lily and her mom feel weird, mainly visually. Hope to fix it later Tell me what you think!
2023-11-03 07:17:26 +0000 UTC View Post
Sorry it's taking long to get pages sketched. Had a couple commissions and irl stuff come up. Should have the next part to chapter 1 out tomorrow
2023-11-03 05:00:42 +0000 UTC View Post
Cuteness overload OG fans might recognize the original inspiration
2023-11-01 05:17:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Lily Armstrong - first loli on the moon Nude ver - https://baraag.net/deck/@Anamadic/111325077129557258
2023-10-30 17:15:47 +0000 UTC View Post
She's too adorable, give her the whole bowl!
2023-10-30 03:19:24 +0000 UTC View Post
Starting off the second book! With more heartbreak... The part of Lily breaking into tears and screaming was in the script but I felt it was necessary for this emotional moment of Lily resorting to staying with her mother. Legit almost started tearing up when I began piecing the scene together in my head. It's not gonna be thi...
2023-10-24 08:29:18 +0000 UTC View Post
Did these sketches today to concept Lily's mom's house for book 2
2023-10-24 01:07:15 +0000 UTC View Post
Shopping trip! Outfit for a scene in book 2!! I can't wait! Also gonna use this as a wall scroll design!
2023-10-23 06:55:58 +0000 UTC View Post
I've decited to start posting the script for book 2. I have also decided to jump straight into sketching the next book instead of waiting till next year. I hope to have a lot sketched before next year so I can start posting pages then.
-Ana
From Now On, I’m Taking This Girl Under My Wing -...
2023-10-23 00:58:45 +0000 UTC View PostI have a lot of the script for book 2 complete and was wondering if I should post them here, chapter by chapter.
Let me know in the comments if I should post them here!
2023-10-22 03:36:27 +0000 UTC View Post
Inspired by the McDonalds loli :)
2023-10-18 17:25:46 +0000 UTC View Post
She's so cute! I'd let her destroy me. I like to think Lily asked Danny to bring boxes home from work just for this.
2023-10-17 16:30:57 +0000 UTC View Post
Lily loves school and looking cute!
2023-10-16 02:36:13 +0000 UTC View Post
This book is Finally finished. I'm incredibly happy with this book, I first wrote this in November last year during my only semester at college. I left college and started doing things I actually wanted to do, and I'm incredibly happy making comics! Thank you all so much for supporting me and this massive project! I'm currently...
2023-10-14 20:32:18 +0000 UTC View Post
She's cute, but she'll beat you up Win, win
2023-10-11 16:01:52 +0000 UTC View Post
Good girl Nude ver. https://baraag.net/@Anamadic/111212150280166326
2023-10-10 18:34:33 +0000 UTC View Post
